she wrote a lot of onomatopoeias (sound words) and repetition
text showed how it should be read (... s l o w l y used the shape of words used color to represent expression used all caps)
created sense of wonder/mystery
used sets of 3 (repeated it later) some of them..., at least one of them...,
i liked how she wrote at least one of them..., some of them..., ...
this reminded me of math
she was very descriptive - which caused me to use imagery, which made the reading more fun
this made me want to ride a roller coster- good effect on her readers, persuasive
she didn't say a lot, but what she said was to the point (sentence fluency)
she used parenthesis to describe inner thought
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